After this weeks group tutorial I have been given some feedback regarding
the pacing of the piece, it would appear that people start to lose interest in
the piece and I feel that partly this is due to the soundtrack that I am using
at the moment, also the piece has a real lack of structure something that I
will be fixing over the next couple of weeks.
I have now rewritten a structure to properly get across the themes and
to keep people interested in what they are watching. This new structure will
build and build in the way a song does, having a crescendo that all the
previous parts build to, this I feel will also benefit from the new soundtrack
that I am composing to run alongside the visuals.
The film now starts with the super 8mm footage, moving swiftly onto the
video footage from past projects, it then moves into the section of images from
old to new eventually layering ontop of one another to the point they become
pixelated then the video breaks as it can no longer be read by the device that
is playing it and it begins to glitch the sound and visuals, this glitch then
becomes worse and worse as the piece continues as it struggles to process the
layers of glitched images and video until it has no choice but to revert back
to the start of the video and the super 8mm footage.
This now better gets the themes that I am exploring with this work
rather than being an over edited collection of home movies and facebook photos,
which is what I had presented at the last group, tutorial.
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